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Frozen, ancient
Hiding, resting, waiting
All buried things will one day see light again
Growing, cracking, emerging
Final, orgasmic

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 10/22/2016 5:53:00 PM
Congrats on your creative work being in the winners' list..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2016 9:25:00 PM
Rob, nice descriptions. I liked the 4th line but it did not go with contest rules. But I still liked it. There is so much truth to it. Congratulations and thanks for your entry.
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:57:00 AM
Really nicely done. This poem really does describe perfectly your theme. It paints picture in the mind.
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