Deliverance From Exodus

Come along for the ride
Surrender foolish pride
A stone has already been cast
It will not be the last
So it begins
Deliverance from sin
Feel the changes within
So ends the years
No more blood, sweat, and tears
The time has come to let go of all fears
No more debating 
Foundations have already started shaking
The clouds are finally breaking
Time for embracing
All the dreams you gave up chasing…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 23, 2009 at 4:49 PM
We can lock ourselves in a box where walls of pride can allow our fears to fester. I like the way you go for it by embracing "all the dreams you gave up chasing." They're our dreams, so there's no need to chase them. When we realize this, we move forward without fear. Excellent write, Joseph! Love, Carolyn
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