Deliverance

Each day
as the night falls
and I lay my head
on the lap of sleep
to rest,
Someone sneaks in
through the backdoor
of my mind and
lights up myriad candles
of a disconcertingly recurring dream.

Holding my hand
with an angelic softness
It leads me on a 
meandering grassy trail
across lush meadows
through the fields of flowers
past verdant woods and valleys
onto a dusty sun-baked path
engulfed in a shimmering
haze of heat and dust to
an abandoned stable
that sits silently and forlorn
in the searing midday sun
amid a windswept wasteland.

There it makes me sit
on a sacrificial altar,
Puts on my head
a crown of thorns
and hands me
a burning cross.


~"Hallucination" contest by Brenden J Simons.

"Dreams" contest by rob carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 9:35 PM
That is some dream ! Great delivery, Abdul. Congrats on your honorable mention.
Barden Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Abdul - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 6:33 PM
ABUDL. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
Haight Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Outstanding, Abdul! Congrats on your wonderful win! Sandra
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Abdul :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
Carmack Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:27 AM
What a smile this brought to my face. Took me to Jonah sitting on the east side of Nineveh. Congrats Abdul.
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