Deliverance

Exalted worm burrowing deep
Mysterious devil inside
Fragile notions haunting my sleep
Slithering faith disguised as pride

Shredding the fabric of ideals
Notions of grandeur twist the soul
Nobody knows just how it feels
Slide headlong down the rabbit hole

Cowering deep beneath the crust
Prayers of release without pity
All works of man begin to rust
Fanged beasts roam the empty city

Eyes suppressing the cosmic dance
Pierce through the empty husk of life
Testaments to the endless trance
Unscrambling ambitions from strife

Predatory hawks gnaw my guts
Cutting the sky like razor blades
Ebbing out from those tiny cuts
Until the glow of despair fades

Sweat and blood irrigate the field
Vigilant cells divide to win
Begging the gap to be revealed
Pathogens hide beneath the skin

Redemptive hope prances away
As complacency takes control
Mercy ignores our grim foray
Hiding behind our ersatz goal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals John. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:34 PM
John, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 19, 2009 at 2:53 PM
This is one of my favorites of yours, truly heartfelt and beautifully delivered. Congratulations on our first round survival and good luck!
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April 4, 2009 at 10:01 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Much pain in this profound write, John ... seems to be the angst of our age ... smile ... beautiful writing and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
Ehigiator Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:19 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. God Bless , Always Tyesha
Adeite Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 2:53 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome john!. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature.everyone needs deliverance... Adeleke
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March 26, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations John on "Deliverance" being featured. Hopefully it is not too little too late. Vince
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Congrats on being featured this week. "Shredding the fabric of ideals" nice line...Raul
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Fontes Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your featured write! Kirstie
Winter Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 22, 2009 at 7:44 PM
John...this is an outstanding write broseph!! As always, your imagery and wording are top notch...It's funny...I read some of your lines and they remind me of Hunter S. Thompson. I don't know if you take that as a compliment or not...but I think he was a twisted genius! Anywayz---congrats on a well deserved feature!! Right on, Write on!! Steve
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November 24, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Strong language brilliantly scripted... wonderful phrasing with occasional alliteration and assonance most effective. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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