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Deliverance

Exalted worm burrowing deep
Mysterious devil inside
Fragile notions haunting my sleep
Slithering faith disguised as pride

Shredding the fabric of ideals
Notions of grandeur twist the soul
Nobody knows just how it feels
Slide headlong down the rabbit hole

Cowering deep beneath the crust
Prayers of release without pity
All works of man begin to rust
Fanged beasts roam the empty city

Eyes suppressing the cosmic dance
Pierce through the empty husk of life
Testaments to the endless trance
Unscrambling ambitions from strife

Predatory hawks gnaw my guts
Cutting the sky like razor blades
Ebbing out from those tiny cuts
Until the glow of despair fades

Sweat and blood irrigate the field
Vigilant cells divide to win
Begging the gap to be revealed
Pathogens hide beneath the skin

Redemptive hope prances away
As complacency takes control
Mercy ignores our grim foray
Hiding behind our ersatz goal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/12/2009 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals John. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:34:00 PM
John, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/19/2009 2:53:00 PM
This is one of my favorites of yours, truly heartfelt and beautifully delivered. Congratulations on our first round survival and good luck!
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:01:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:52:00 AM
Much pain in this profound write, John ... seems to be the angst of our age ... smile ... beautiful writing and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/27/2009 11:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. God Bless , Always Tyesha
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:53:00 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome john!. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature.everyone needs deliverance... Adeleke
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations John on "Deliverance" being featured. Hopefully it is not too little too late. Vince
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Date: 3/25/2009 12:07:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week. "Shredding the fabric of ideals" nice line...Raul
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured write! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/22/2009 7:44:00 PM
John...this is an outstanding write broseph!! As always, your imagery and wording are top notch...It's funny...I read some of your lines and they remind me of Hunter S. Thompson. I don't know if you take that as a compliment or not...but I think he was a twisted genius! Anywayz---congrats on a well deserved feature!! Right on, Write on!! Steve
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:24:00 AM
Strong language brilliantly scripted... wonderful phrasing with occasional alliteration and assonance most effective. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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