Delineating Dawn

tearing a black leaf
divine artist painted blue -
sun, clouds, cock and wheel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Zahid Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Striking imagery
Somadas Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:50 AM
Thank you Paghunda..
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 12:35 PM
'cock and wheel' sounds like a restaurant that serves breakfast only. lol. G.L. in the contest, my friend! :) gw
Somadas Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 11:37 PM
Yeah..With Kellogg Cock..lol..Takecare my friend..
Pandit Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 6:58 AM
It sure is a painting--well crafted, Jenish. All the best.
Somadas Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 11:35 PM
Thank you Vijay..
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 8:12 PM
I agree with Sam. So creative this is, Jenish!!
Somadas Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Kauffman Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 1:53 PM
So creative, Jenish! A very unique and thoughtful viewpoint. Good luck in the contest!
Somadas Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Thank you for your support Sam..
Trifiatis Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 11:21 AM
The dawn of day's miracle painted with words divine dearest Jenish. Hugs xxx
Somadas Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 11:50 PM
Thank you Demetrios..
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