Delicious Without Comparison

family are the icing 
friends are the cherry
and what are icing and cherry 
without my cake?
God you are my cake,
this delicious cake i want to share
with all the people in the world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Baez Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 6:24 AM
A witty worm I am, lol, and you, delicious without comparison like your poem. DDDAAAMMMMNNNNN! :)
Strand Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Delicious Charma.Rgds Brian
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May 14, 2009 at 6:30 PM
Charmaine,..I love this faith baked,...I mean, based comparison,...awesome poem Dear !....james
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Charmaine, I have this image of a radient woman with a smile that never leaves her face. You bring so much happiness to us through your wonderful poetry. Thank you! Love, carolyn
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May 14, 2009 at 1:46 PM
recomment jim--my uncle is a priest,and when i was young he used to say to me when you grow up you ll be a nice nun and i used to reply crying,noooo!i wanna be a priest like you;-),but time shown me that if i was to be anun all the nuns would run away,and i took another road very different;-)but i do see God in my darkness dear friend you made me smile---charma
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May 14, 2009 at 1:37 PM
sounds to me like you are taking a Missionaries Oath! Charmaine!!! love it!!! I have had incredible Catholic Nuns of various orders in my family through the 20th. century, and they still answer my prayers!!! .....whewww!! how did you get me talkin' about that??!!! great poem!!! Jim
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