Delicate Soul

A gift inside for you
It's your good heart seen through and through

You walk into the room
So sweet, kind, and gentle- Vavoom!

Shoots into the air colored strands of confetti
And oodles of strings like spaghetti

A gift inside for you
wrapped inside tissue

A music box of rare issue
wrapped inside silk tissue

The silk tissue inside is more of the gift
And represents the delicateness of your soul- uplifting!

The sun shines in the room
All eyes are on you as your amazement looms

You are like a sunrise surprise, delicateness of soul
Now all are mesmerized!

By Susan J. Mills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 6:16 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, susan
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December 7, 2009 at 11:17 AM
Wow hun, this is just beautiful. I can feel myself in that room as you open up the music box. Everyone's face lights up in the room mesmerized at you. Truly enjoyed, Keep writing, your talent showing!Love Light Patty
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