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Delicate Soul

A gift inside for you It's your good heart seen through and through You walk into the room So sweet, kind, and gentle- Vavoom! Shoots into the air colored strands of confetti And oodles of strings like spaghetti A gift inside for you wrapped inside tissue A music box of rare issue wrapped inside silk tissue The silk tissue inside is more of the gift And represents the delicateness of your soul- uplifting! The sun shines in the room All eyes are on you as your amazement looms You are like a sunrise surprise, delicateness of soul Now all are mesmerized! By Susan J. Mills

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/28/2014 6:16:00 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, susan
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:17:00 AM
Wow hun, this is just beautiful. I can feel myself in that room as you open up the music box. Everyone's face lights up in the room mesmerized at you. Truly enjoyed, Keep writing, your talent showing!Love Light Patty
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