Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Delicate Nuance

Softly a breeze dances 
across my cheek
Flowing through my hair 
as if wanting to speak
Then lifting me up with 
its gentle magic
Tenderly stroking my soul 
so savory and sleek
As my body becomes 
weightless and weak
Snuggling embracing you
so mildly meek
Flowing in sweet dips,
let us ride with an ease
Softest of whispers ask
can it tenderly tease
Soothingly tickling my 
essence to please
Removing your stress spoiling 
you in many degrees
Purring how my love for
you will never cease
A dreamy calm floats 
on the clouds seas
In a delicate nuance as 
troubles we will release

8/6/2020

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John Fleming August 30, 2020 at 4:44 AM Could not agree more than what has already been remarked upon...very pleasing, flowing poetry this, Brenda. Love that word - "nuance"! Again, has that underlying rapping melody that you employ so very well -- good work! In affection. :) john Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:18 AM Thank you so much John!;) his I have missed your comments!:)

Gary Radice August 9, 2020 at 2:32 AM Congratulations Brenda - written with that passionate Chiri charm and heart & soul that pervades all your work. Brenda Chiri August 9, 2020 at 12:29 PM Gary thank you so very much!;)

John Watt August 8, 2020 at 6:04 PM You are on a roll this week with your wins, Brenda! Congratulations, my friend ~ John Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 8:16 PM John thank you! One can only try! Appreciate your comment!:)

Newton Ranaweera August 8, 2020 at 2:15 PM Brenda, this piece is truly delicate!! Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 2:37 PM Newton thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2020 at 11:31 AM Love the title of this beautifulflowing soothing poem, Brenda. GREAT avatar too!! oh I see you placed number one! Congrats. Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 2:37 PM Thank you Andrea you are too kind!;)

John Watt August 7, 2020 at 4:14 PM You certainly do have this style down to an art form, Brenda. Your words are saturated with tenderness and a quiet calm that is dreamy, soothing, and so romantic. Well done, and a hearty congratulations for your #1 placement ~ John Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 2:37 PM Thank you John it’s all from how I feel love should be!:)

Vijay Pandit August 6, 2020 at 1:07 PM Simply beautiful..tender poetry, Brenda. Brenda Chiri August 8, 2020 at 2:36 PM Vijay thank you!:)

Tom Cunningham August 6, 2020 at 10:59 AM You are the Queen of romantic verse Brenda. No one writes them like you do. Tom Brenda Chiri August 6, 2020 at 11:01 AM Ahh Tom thank you so much! I never realized I was royalty;) hahaha! Nah see I learnt it all from all of you here!;)