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Delicate Description

As the wind blows warm from the west the day unravels Take up your pen and put the beauty into words A delicate description is required on your part let the dawn speak to you as you revel in its glory Didn't think you would ever see such beauty? Well, you have to tell everyone about it in your verse and your verse is something that will bring peace it you listen carefully to the sound of the wind, the gold of the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/1/2012 4:04:00 PM
this is so gentle . A great way to describe the "job" of a poet!
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Date: 9/27/2008 8:15:00 AM
Good flow in this poem. The short lines work well. Most writers will relate to your words. You may want to switch the category from I do not know to free verse. I really like this one. Thank you for sharing it and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/18/2008 4:47:00 PM
Exceedingly elegant poem. Of course your charming words bring peace to tormented and languishing souls. Wishing you greater successes. -Mohammad
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Date: 8/16/2008 1:34:00 PM
Your title echos your words in the way you have written this lovely poem. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/15/2008 10:39:00 AM
Your words are golden. No one can ever tell you to stop to smell the roses, you are full aware of its fragrance and beauty and share it with all of us. Thank you dear poet. Love, Shar
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