Deja Vu

When jasmine scents the springtime air A deja vu begins to bloom A lovely flower ever near A memory caught in its perfume When a summer breeze kisses azure skies and a certain song begins to play A deja vu begins to rise As in the melody you sway

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/28/2024 8:41:00 AM

Oh wow, this is such a gorgeous poem dear Joseph.. I love how artistically you've painted the words in a mellifluous and magical way, I can almost inhale the jasmine fragrances here & feel the emotions of deja vu, such brilliant is the impact of phraseology here.. A beautiful poem with creative imagery & depth too.. Absolutely loved reading this, sending you light and best wishes..

Ink Empress

Date: 1/28/2024 6:59:00 AM

Dear Joseph, this poem hits home for me, as sometimes memories come crawling , when i smell certain perfumes or scents, scents do have that effect on our mind. I love the flow of this and how well you’ve created this. Pleasure reading always your work.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/27/2024 7:25:00 PM

' A deja vu begins to bloom, ' and I feel as though I'm ' caught in its perfume. ' This is so dreamy and romantic. Your words hold the soft touch of spring. My heart is smiling. :) My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/27/2024 5:41:00 AM

A lovely flower ever near A memory caught in its perfume--delightfully reminiscing in memories. Much enjoyed the romantic voice of your poem, Joseph.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/26/2024 8:50:00 PM

Fabulous thought in this poem. The perfume and memories that reminisce a deja vu of another time.

Silent One

Date: 1/26/2024 11:46:00 AM

so you feel de ja vu from Jasmine.. Lovely poem..

Deb M

Date: 1/26/2024 10:44:00 AM

Just lovely Joseph……fresh and sweet! Debx