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Deja Voodoo

What is this Deja VooDoo as I hold you in my arms Is there an island moon to illuminate your charms Are we lovers on the sand when youth was ours to hold Are the palm trees standing guard never to grow old Have we just transcended time together and as one In rapture still, to kiss the night and touch the rising sun

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/17/2021 8:31:00 PM

Ah, the magic of it, Mike. You have captured this very well, and I loved it!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2021 4:35:00 AM

That's love isn''t it Milton!! Happy Saturday!!

Justin Abdool

Date: 9/17/2021 3:46:00 PM

Nice one, Mike. I especially like the last four stanzas. Justin.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2021 4:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Justin!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/17/2021 1:27:00 PM

Beautiful scenery for love to prosper, Mike. Touch the moon!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2021 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Vijay, Happy Friday!!

Dm Babbit

Date: 9/17/2021 8:14:00 AM

Sweet dejavu.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2021 1:15:00 PM

Thanks DM!!

Silent One

Date: 9/17/2021 7:28:00 AM

Love the opening lines..What is this Deja VooDoo as I hold you in my arms Is there an island moon to illuminate your charms.. if I didn't know any better I would think you are in love..

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2021 7:40:00 AM

Thank you Silent One and yes, I am always in love !!! Happy Friday!!

Chris Con

Date: 9/17/2021 7:08:00 AM

Nice.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2021 7:21:00 AM

Thanks Chris!!