Deity

don't bet on lucky,

                                     prepare for that deity,

                                                       Opportunity !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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July 20, 2011 at 5:23 PM
you're ok with the form content but punctuation is not used nor title in this form, the first line maybe used as a title light & Love
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