Jason Cunningham Poet I do not know?

Deicide

I close my eyes to hide the pain inside,
I close my eyes to die inside.

  eyes are closed so i can hide,
I close my eyes to die inside.

 Within my mind I search inside,
finally in time I've died inside.

 I close my eyes to hide inside,
 with  eyes closed i die inside
 
Finally in time I die inside,
 only in time its deicide.

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Joseph Spence Sr May 24, 2010 at 3:19 PM I like the play on words in this poem. It flows very well and is creative. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2010 at 5:22 AM A fine introspective poem.

Poet Destroyer A May 23, 2010 at 5:03 AM strong words which you have written here, nice write

Skat A May 23, 2010 at 4:43 AM DEEP WRITE, I LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THE FIRST TWO LINES, SO MUCH TO HIDE YET YOU KEEP IT MIND AND TO YOURSELF, ENJOYED