Defying Cupid

I hope you remember me 
how I'll remember you
The haunting faces 
coupled with cruel words too
You spat words at me 
as sharp and smooth as darts
You smashed delicate wires 
that entwined our hearts
So calm and clever 
to all others it was a joke
But I knew each move you made 
was all done to provoke
My actions that followed 
were judged by all as stupid
The ache still lingers, 
its my debt to defying cupid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 17, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Nice one, enjoyed the write...P.D.
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