Deflowered Like a Dog

deflowered devoured
blood trickles 
and runs  
was it good 
was it fun 
tell darling 
speak hun 
more than 
tongue tied
I lied 
you trust 
we thrust
and than you 
died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 10, 2011 at 7:05 AM
very sad and touchy write, bias
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