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Definitions Iii

Only you can do that Thing you do That I can’t Quite explain… How in my private time I am left helplessly In the remnants of you Hoping to see you again- What you did Lingers into daydreams Like fine mist- And etched Within permanently Like my First kiss… Damn baby, Where did you acquire This style, It is vivaciously shrewd? Escaping clear definitions, The obvious invisible, And what is clear Seems to allude- What you did is Astrological and Void like the Furthest star… Jena se qua

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Date: 8/26/2010 4:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Keith. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:29:00 PM
romantic... poem you have here... love the flow of words. to avoid "I Don't know" try to read up the forms of poetry... this poem is more like a free verse. I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/25/2010 11:57:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. check out our contests on P.S. and enter.. with luv..
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