Keith Lea Poet I do not know?

Definitions Iii

Only you can do that
Thing you do
That I can’t
Quite explain…
How in my private time
I am left helplessly
In the remnants of you
Hoping to see you again-
What you did
Lingers into daydreams
Like fine mist-
And etched 
Within permanently
Like my
First kiss…
Damn baby,
Where did you acquire
This style,
It is vivaciously shrewd?
Escaping clear definitions,
The obvious invisible,
And what is clear
Seems to allude-
What you did is
Astrological and
Void like the 
Furthest star…
                       Jena se qua

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Carol Sunshine Brown August 26, 2010 at 4:02 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Keith. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite August 25, 2010 at 4:29 PM romantic... poem you have here... love the flow of words. to avoid "I Don't know" try to read up the forms of poetry... this poem is more like a free verse. I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 25, 2010 at 11:57 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. check out our contests on P.S. and enter.. with luv..