Defining Love

Love-
Walk a park?
Putrid fruits?
Butterflies- inferno?
None of the above

Frown, dear love.
Frown.

In love-twitch,
Twitch.
Quaver, Stutter
Unsound 

Poetic lines, cherished love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 3:34 PM
I am listening to your wisdom ... and will be still connected. Love
Williams Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:55 AM
Thought provoking and very original Sajdah... you are talented
Loveless Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Pretty. Creative. Nice Work. Jese
Chachere Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 8:45 AM
short && creative! very exciting to read^^ oh and thank you for the comment!
Mckenzie Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 11:50 AM
I like your style of writing wonderfully done! Laura :)
Smalling Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Still trying to penetrate the park ... where wrap in genius I stand afar off waving ... right on, dear poet.
Shahwan Avatar
May 18, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Thrilling.
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