Define Us

join me now my friend,
as we swim through the crusted sand
let us study our sanity,
the retardation of being "different"
in this profound planet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 13, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Wow i did not expect this much love. thank you so much. i shall read your poems with the same soulful eye. <3
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October 11, 2013 at 9:45 PM
what a profound planet we live on I loved it
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October 8, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Vera, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 7, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Vera,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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October 7, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Hie, Vera. Welcome to poetry family. Unique style..simple energetic, I enjoyed youe work. JM
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October 7, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Vera ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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