Defamiliarization Mind

I never understood this condition 
that continued to invade my writing 
skills at first I would write then go 
back to put the punctuation in this
 
made my poems end abruptly when 
I needed my readers to continue my 
story hadn't ended until that punctuation 
stalled my readers from finishing my poem
 
I sat up searching for why I composed this 
way soon my style of writing was compared 
to e.e cummings he too often left out the 
punctuation I read further there was Ulysses 

James Joyce Cormac Mc Carthy I began 
to realize I was different but I wasn't alone 
great scholars and Nobel prize winners 
also had my condition why there was 

a word for this style of writing a word 
for why I  was comfortable leaving out 
the punctuation defamiliarisation in fact 
I believe this allows my readers to know 

right away this is my original work I wouldn't 
change a thing in further research I found 
a few more poets just like me in Russia 
why I Certainly would call this a poem 

perhaps a commentary of sorts a very 
creative way to use this new word I'm 
quite fond of defamiliarisation absolutely 
driven creative culture of an awesome read
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Wells Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 7:45 PM
I loved reading this poem. As a poet, I find myself using punctuation like stop signs and turn signals to tell the reader what I intend to say, but I have no difficulty understanding your poetry. There is a natural flow to your words on the page, and I admire your ability to use it effectively. Well done!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 9:52 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write/story. It is great to be different. I have always enjoyed being different. Have a wonderful/blessed ~ day/weekend writing away.....................
Nicholsen Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Thanks a bunch Paula have a wonderful day.
Rodgers Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Dear Yolanda, I loved how you dig into the complexities of writing and the unique style that sets your work apart. Your journey of understanding and acceptance is both relatable and inspiring. Embracing your distinct voice and style is a testament to your creativity and writing authenticity. Keep embracing your originality and driving creativity forward. - Blessings, Daniel
Nicholsen Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much Daniel have a blessed day.
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