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---Deer Tracks

deer tracks
leading to chomped impatiens
gunshots in the woods

naturehaiku

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Nick Bagnall

September 15, 2011 at 7:28 AM

Prized Impatiens I presume, the day before the show no doubt !I'm sure we've all thought it at some point. :) How did you separate the top two entries in the buble contest they were both superb, thank you for inspiring them.

Kash Poet

September 11, 2011 at 3:28 PM

Very nice haiku here Debbie....a soupmail is waiting for you.

Jl Sadberry

September 11, 2011 at 12:19 PM

Smile, *^_^* “You Know, My Dear Brother John Rhinem Once Told Myself A Small Tale About A Bit of Your Beauties Truth &, I Can Surely See What He Was Telling Myself My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Debbie! *^_^* Patience Is A Virtue & Make Sure That Those Hunters Have The Right Permits Afore They Get Fined *^_#* My Dear!?” === My Love Unto Your Wonders, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 11, 2011 at 9:17 AM

Today a truth I leave here for you. I wish I had fancy words to write a comment to you but I don't. I did enjoy reading your poetry Debbie. If I did not enjoy reading your poetry you would not be reading this now. I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

---Deer Tracks

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