Deer Hiaku
My wife Jill was just commenting on how
she saw some deer when she came home
from choir practice Wednesday. They were
about 30 feet away from a pond. She has
seen then several times but never actually
at the pond drinking water. Here is my Horn
Haiku I wrote in reference to this.
Will wave magic wand;
Deer will appear at the pond
Into dark will run.
Jim Horn
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