Deer Dear

settling in forests deer* and doe freely flourish... soon, their antlers nailed
*Deuteronomy 14:5 The hart, and the roebuck, and the fallow deer, and the wild goat, and the pygarg, and the wild ox, and the chamois. April 11, 2022 4th place, "Wild Animal Haiku" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 4/18/2022.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Way to go in the contest, Beata. Congrats. Interesting last line here.
Alex Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 8:59 PM
Great writing on an innocent creature. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 8:50 AM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 12, 2022 at 2:20 PM
deer is my power animal, this poem appealed to me.
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