Deer and Fawn

We pranced by the river 
As the wind swayed my antlers 
I captured with my eyes, a picture 
As my fawn jumped up and up seeing the pattern 

Made by the leaves 
In the big, fluffy shrub
This was the dream 
But alas there was a man cub

My fawn went nearer
Peeking at this creature 
Unwarned they were sinners 
She was caught by the trigger 

A parent’s biggest nightmare
Witnessed painfully with fear
Raced away in the darkness
I frayed in tears

6 June 2021
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Daniel Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Great personification used to bring out the harmful effects of hunting.. well penned, Shreya:)
Ln Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 9:55 PM
Thank you Jo!
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