Deer

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The forest holds many beautiful forms of prettieness, none seem to be prettier than the elegant deer that roam the hills.

forests pulchritude 
antlers maybe-maybe not
elegant footsteps 

Haiku in 5 7 5 Only Volume 1 Poetry Contest 
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7/4/2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 7/20/2018 10:32:00 AM

There is so much beauty in your brevity, Charlie. Your lovely haiku is as elegant as the subject matter.. Warmest wishes my soulful friend. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 4:41:00 PM

Always a pleasure to see your pleasant and charming comments, Susan! Hope you have a wonderful weekend...as always, warmest wishes to you as well my dear friend...Charlie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2018 2:42:00 PM

- I met a young deer about 30 meters from my house last night, it was beautiful - A lovely haiku, Charlie - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 4:39:00 PM

It's always nice to meet such a beautiful animal. I see them all the time! Have a wonderful weekend Anne-Lise...hugs // Charlie :)

Lyric Man

Date: 7/5/2018 8:46:00 AM

Nice Haiku, Charles!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 4:38:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Lyric Man! Have a great and safe weekend!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/5/2018 4:45:00 AM

Seen through the eyes of both the hunter and the lover of nature, isn't it beautiful, what God made I mean. Have a great day.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 4:37:00 PM

God's creations are of such beauty...thank you, Pixie! Have a wonderful weekend...Charlie

Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2018 1:28:00 AM

they certainly are gorgeous animals to observe, very beautiful poem Charles:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 4:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan! They are pretty...have a great weekend...hugs // Charlie xx