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The forest holds many beautiful forms of prettieness, none seem to be prettier than the elegant deer that roam the hills.

Deer

forests pulchritude 
antlers maybe-maybe not
elegant footsteps 

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7/4/2018
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Ashley Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 10:32 AM
There is so much beauty in your brevity, Charlie. Your lovely haiku is as elegant as the subject matter.. Warmest wishes my soulful friend. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:41 PM
Always a pleasure to see your pleasant and charming comments, Susan! Hope you have a wonderful weekend...as always, warmest wishes to you as well my dear friend...Charlie :)
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:42 PM
- I met a young deer about 30 meters from my house last night, it was beautiful - A lovely haiku, Charlie - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:39 PM
It's always nice to meet such a beautiful animal. I see them all the time! Have a wonderful weekend Anne-Lise...hugs // Charlie :)
Man Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Nice Haiku, Charles!
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thank you kindly, Lyric Man! Have a great and safe weekend!
Rose  Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:45 AM
Seen through the eyes of both the hunter and the lover of nature, isn't it beautiful, what God made I mean. Have a great day.
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:37 PM
God's creations are of such beauty...thank you, Pixie! Have a wonderful weekend...Charlie
Allison Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 1:28 AM
they certainly are gorgeous animals to observe, very beautiful poem Charles:-) hugs Jan xx
Messina Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 4:36 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! They are pretty...have a great weekend...hugs // Charlie xx
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