Deeply Sexyku

viscera besieged elbow deep in ecstasy succumbing to bliss 11.05.2019 Sexyku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/13/2020 8:13:00 AM

Passionate stuff. Love this one

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 3/13/2020 9:46:00 AM

Tee hee ;), Thankya! xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/8/2019 2:14:00 PM

'Elbow deep in ecstasy' -- wonderful line, Haiku-nik! Just wondering: That elbow deep isn't any relation to the elbow grease I use when I wax my bald head, is it?! ~ Yul Brynner

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/9/2019 1:58:00 PM

Giggles! My muse was rolling on the floor with this one, having way too much fun. ;), ...word pairings, like wine and cheese ~x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/6/2019 3:20:00 PM

Love it! For a sec, elbow through me. Had to read again...lol!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/7/2019 1:00:00 PM

Giggles ;), Thank you! Much left to interpretation~ xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/6/2019 6:54:00 AM

Holy shit Maureen. You said it, not me lol.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/7/2019 4:59:00 PM

I read that when Hitchcock showed Psycho to whoever had to give it the okay; THEY said it was lacking something. Hitchcock took the reels home; put them on a shelf for several weeks, and didn't do anything to it. He took it back and everyone said it was great. He knew it was perfect.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2019 9:22:00 AM

Not to be misconstrued, I thought of that after I wrote it. A documentary on the making of, that scene passing the censors.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/6/2019 8:59:00 AM

Exactly. Intent is all that is needed. Let the reader/viewer/who ever come to their own conclusions. And people's comments are based on what they know. Some people have never seen Psycho, but their comment is based on their knowledge. Your words are brilliant Maureen!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 11/6/2019 7:03:00 AM

LOL! I was thinking of the shower scene in Psycho, you didn't actually see anything ;), xomo!