Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Deeply Hurt Love

Feet not up yet dreaming looking into the deep distant horizon screams
need to take turf in remembering howls across oceans mourning dream special wish

You would want a good fire tonight for sure ice stormy fierce cold cutting
out walking giant waves hitting of the shore thundering pounds lashing clash 

Today the wind fairly woke me up piercing wide eye opening vision
Then when I got home just felt ten years younger alive again one storm

Now that's a good omen laughing to myself carries one to the high Heavens
Must be the salted spray love mixed with sea mist smashes you to the ground love

New therapy go out to the sea front as gales howling with angry force break news
blowing giant waves crashing heavy of cliffs thundering roars echoes inside sad 

Wind spitting sea salt sand peppering the face in your hardened heart
hate remains your driving engine unforgiving hung up on the past

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Charmaine Chircop February 8, 2015 at 12:41 PM So heartwrenching this is Liam.Hate should never be the engine of nobody..let along of people We love.So deep! Liam Mcdaid February 22, 2015 at 4:58 PM thank you charmaine but sometimes people are blind to the truth wonderful comment dear pal sorry i am late answering not on line as much spending more time with my family wishing you and your family a blessed beautiful sunday

Funom Makama February 6, 2015 at 7:52 AM Your lines are so alive and real. Munching them in my mind is the blessing I am receiving this moment. This is such an excellent share and I really do not know what more to say. A 7 definitely Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 3:51 AM thank you kindly funom for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Robert Lindley February 5, 2015 at 8:46 AM Adding this fine poem to my fav list and thanks!!! Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 11:39 AM sorry not been on much recently robert but in court the judge slammed the police saying have they a prejustice against me thank god for letting the judge see the truth bless you robert your a true friend

Robert Lindley February 5, 2015 at 8:45 AM When a man hurts from a love gone bad it helps to walk alone, ponder life and know that future blessings will eventually come. I've walked that path my friend, sadly more than once. Your poem sings of a conflict that others may never understand but trust me on this. I understand it well. As we both share a wild past and often people fail to see who we really are. A7... Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 11:33 AM its really awful loving someone robert who's blind to the truth dealing with arising problems without simply caring even in friendship its a path of judgement and pain yeah so true dear pal they do tend to fail in seeing the truth i must agree you hit it straight on the head pal thank god robert 3 charges are now dropped as there was no substance to them so his light of truth is beginning to show

Cherl Dunn February 2, 2015 at 1:00 PM A very powerful piece of excellence, and thanks for your comments, cheri Liam Mcdaid February 4, 2015 at 8:28 AM cherl dear pal thank you so kindly for the dazzling beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Demetrios Trifiatis February 2, 2015 at 5:56 AM "Howling" beauty your poem is my friend, Liam, with "thunderous" expressions of unsurpassed wording! Liam Mcdaid February 2, 2015 at 10:03 AM deeply touched by your comment demetrios tells a story all by itself my past has come to judge me smiling truth dear pal i am innocent in heart and law of land on both affairs counts bible so now i will await my fate as he is merciful in the end supreme law no matter which way the anvil falls i will smile to see if justice really works sorry your comment took out some of my thought

Arthur Vaso February 1, 2015 at 8:09 PM I had to read this a few times, which is a compliment, for to feel the depth of this, one can not read it lightly, great pen Liam !! Liam Mcdaid February 2, 2015 at 9:28 AM yeah this one is deep arthur well spotted thank you for taking the time pal truth never served me justice only it will in the end thank god he can see as people are blind to fact over fiction its like been stuck at the crossroads those judging one day will see the face of the one they condemned wrongly staring into the sea i let a roar out in deep loving forgiving pain

Dorian Petersen Potter February 1, 2015 at 8:06 PM Hi Liam! Very powerful pen you got here! Wow! I really enjoy it! The imagery is very effective and dramatic, my dearest friend.A huge solid 7 +++ from me !Your pen is mighty golden! May all your dreams and hopes come true on day.God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always!Have a very lovely day!:) Love and hugs! xoxox D. ^O^ Liam Mcdaid February 2, 2015 at 9:18 AM dorian wonderful comment dear friend truly appreciated bless you

Gary Bateman February 1, 2015 at 1:41 PM Liam Mate!! I can sum up you Couplet in one word: "Brilliant"!!! Great Work and most moving imagery. A "7" + FAV most definite!! The Leprechaun Choir will sing praises of this magical Couplet. Best Always, Gary Liam Mcdaid February 1, 2015 at 2:38 PM i put a lot of deep thought into this one gary wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you the leprechaun is looking at the moon smiling