Deepest Beauty

This morning woke up golden smiling 
headed into town on the car
coming down from the mountain
standing tallest in this small town
Driving up the hill top to the church 
such a sight greeted my eyes as the sun
it shone so very warm deep in such beauty
lighting the center was the holy crucifix 
I blessed myself beholding such a vision
as it looked like the holy spirit shining down
straight from the steeple felt this warm forgiving
fingers touching deep glowing in loves light
Hope all love can ever do is wish
one day you will see me in bliss 
inside Heaven opens it's wings 
I will greet you with the heart off
very deep undeniable true 
pure love so complete with trust one gift
that will forever inside of me 
It will sing in happiness rejoicing
sweetly singing songbirds a song forever 
always in the finest of tunes touching beats




I drew a style to honor such beauty beginning with nine syllables a silver lining cloud 8/7/8/9/now waves higher 10/11/12 gates of Heaven 12/12
singing in the highest note 11/10/9/8/7 finding comfort soothing rising the tune 8/9 sing in her clouded mist 9/9/10/11/12 love forever remains beautiful to the day you die my tune smiling
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hicks Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 2:57 PM
Very spiritual in that you felt such power and warmth staring at the crucifix. Well penned and always with passion.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:16 PM
yeah i found such warm peace in that moment timothy so i wrote how it felt for me pal thank you kindly dear pal for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:00 AM
When the inner self in harmony is, the beauty, upon the outer world is reflected! Excellent writing, dear Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:50 AM
yeah alone gives one time to reflect demetrios everything that touches love in your life forever remains beautiful i see wonderful comment thank you kindly bless you heartfelt appreciated
Neels Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 6:38 AM
What a gem this is Liam, really enjoyed this beauty.. tc Wilma
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:51 AM
thank you wilma for the truly wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:12 PM
I quote you"This morning woke up golden smiling" such a delightful way to start off this very refreshing landscape of beauty that you've painted here. Another awesome poem Liam, my dear friend. Written with all your heart and soul, and shining golden pen.....Lol...another awesome masterpiece! Love it! a 7 from me to you! God bless you! .... love and hugs! :) xxx D
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:49 AM
dorian thank you dear friend for the heartfelt really very beautiful comment bless you
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 3:58 PM
simply outstanding in its form and beauty:-) a 7 from me too:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcdaid Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM
trying out new styles of writing jan smiling wonderful comment dear pal bless you
Bateman Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:27 PM
Liam . . . Most Excellent here Mate!! The Leprechaun Choir is Chanting: "Give Old Liam a '7' on this." May your green eyes keep sparkling!! Best!! Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:39 PM
oh the teddies eyes just lit up emerald flashing like headlights lol wonderful comment pal deeply appreciated gary ha ha
Chircop Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 1:51 PM
An outstanding poem..Radiant and beautiful!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:07 PM
thank you charmaine dear friend truly extremely beautiful comment heartfelt bless you pal
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:17 AM
A masterful and inspiring write Liam. I am honored to be the first to comment. 7 all the way.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:25 AM
smiling richard just trying out a different styles dear friend thank you for the outstanding beautiful comment wishing you a blessed sunday
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