Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Quintain (English)

Deeper Than Seas

Deeper than seas





Depths of man's heart, deeper than the seas,
Constant turbulence, in the red that flows,
But invisible love, which no one can see,
Reflecting on cheeks, as golden after glows,
Much deeper than seas in the red that flows !

Dive deep within, to lose self to passion, 
Thoughtless mind, dare not say a word,
Rolling down the cheeks, tears in succession,
Loudest screams of heart, can't ever be heard,
Tears roll in succession, dare not say a word !

Trapped in a whirlpool, yet not seek an escape,
Living lifeless in no love, is as good as die, 
Letting go all emotions, is not real piece of cake,
Sweet sorrows of parting, till tears may dry,
Yet not seek an escape, till tears may dry !







Written February 2nd, 2015
For Craig's contest "Manassian quintain"

Entered for poetry contest " Theme #6- The sea- Old/New" by SKAT A
Awarded 10th place win

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Kelly Deschler January 30, 2016 at 10:24 PM Our tears speak much louder than words... These lines are very emotive and speak with deep emotions. A great write, Dr. Upma! Congrats on the win!

Poet Destroyer A January 28, 2016 at 9:43 PM DR UPMA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA

Janice Canerdy January 20, 2016 at 9:24 AM This well-written poem speaks movingly about those silent screams of heartbreak. Congrats on your win. Janice

Pandita Sietesantos January 19, 2016 at 8:11 AM Hi Dr. Sharma, many congratulations on a well-deserved win! This is such a lovely, powerfully emotive Quintain with amazing imagery! Love it! Pandita

Skat A January 18, 2016 at 11:27 PM Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT

Sandra Haight February 4, 2015 at 8:59 PM Very nicely done, Dr. Upma. This is such a challenging form but you mastered it well. Best wishes in the contest. Sandra Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 6, 2015 at 5:48 AM Thnx Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit !

Debbie Guzzi February 4, 2015 at 7:19 PM Full of emotion-soup mail LIght & Love Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 6, 2015 at 5:47 AM Thnx a lot Debbie! Soup mail

Demetrios Trifiatis February 4, 2015 at 4:57 AM No matter how deep we may go the limits of the heart we could never reach thus the pain unlimited may be! Blessed the heart that can escape from the prison of suffering! A brilliant poem Dr. Upma that shows knowledge of matters of love! Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 6, 2015 at 5:50 AM Thnx for ur lovely words n visit Demetrios ! Yes love is my soul my dear poet!

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2015 at 6:21 PM you did a great job with this difficult form, dearie! Good luck in the contest.

Carrie Richards February 2, 2015 at 7:49 PM An amazing job on a form that proves to be so challenging !! Well done, Dr. Sharma!

Sara Kendrick February 2, 2015 at 12:08 PM Reads like winning one to me. Way to go for the contest..I appreciate your visit. Your poem has such a good flow..Sara