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Deeper Than Seas

Deeper than seas Depths of man's heart, deeper than the seas, Constant turbulence, in the red that flows, But invisible love, which no one can see, Reflecting on cheeks, as golden after glows, Much deeper than seas in the red that flows ! Dive deep within, to lose self to passion, Thoughtless mind, dare not say a word, Rolling down the cheeks, tears in succession, Loudest screams of heart, can't ever be heard, Tears roll in succession, dare not say a word ! Trapped in a whirlpool, yet not seek an escape, Living lifeless in no love, is as good as die, Letting go all emotions, is not real piece of cake, Sweet sorrows of parting, till tears may dry, Yet not seek an escape, till tears may dry ! Written February 2nd, 2015 For Craig's contest "Manassian quintain" Entered for poetry contest " Theme #6- The sea- Old/New" by SKAT A Awarded 10th place win

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Date: 1/30/2016 10:24:00 PM
Our tears speak much louder than words... These lines are very emotive and speak with deep emotions. A great write, Dr. Upma! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:43:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:24:00 AM
This well-written poem speaks movingly about those silent screams of heartbreak. Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:11:00 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, many congratulations on a well-deserved win! This is such a lovely, powerfully emotive Quintain with amazing imagery! Love it! Pandita
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:27:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:59:00 PM
Very nicely done, Dr. Upma. This is such a challenging form but you mastered it well. Best wishes in the contest. Sandra
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/6/2015 5:48:00 AM
Thnx Sandra! Appreciate ur kind visit !
Date: 2/4/2015 7:19:00 PM
Full of emotion-soup mail LIght & Love
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/6/2015 5:47:00 AM
Thnx a lot Debbie! Soup mail
Date: 2/4/2015 4:57:00 AM
No matter how deep we may go the limits of the heart we could never reach thus the pain unlimited may be! Blessed the heart that can escape from the prison of suffering! A brilliant poem Dr. Upma that shows knowledge of matters of love!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/6/2015 5:50:00 AM
Thnx for ur lovely words n visit Demetrios ! Yes love is my soul my dear poet!
Date: 2/3/2015 6:21:00 PM
you did a great job with this difficult form, dearie! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2015 7:49:00 PM
An amazing job on a form that proves to be so challenging !! Well done, Dr. Sharma!
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:08:00 PM
Reads like winning one to me. Way to go for the contest..I appreciate your visit. Your poem has such a good flow..Sara
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