Deepening Morn

Dawning shades of blue.
From deep dark depths to great heights.
Hark!  Midnight is gone!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 7:11 AM
C ongratulations on your success in this one Marty. Agape, Moses
Witt-King Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Lovely one, Marty...and congratulations on your win!
Muzzey Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 8:04 PM
So glad congrats are in order Marty .. a wonderful win.. for u my friend.. I guess my "vibes" on this one were correct.. enjoy this victory .. its terrific.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Foster Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:32 PM
This reads with a lilt not usually found in Haiku. ( to me anyway.) It is going in my favourites. well done...Margaret
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 5:19 PM
GReat message,Marty , in this descriptive haiku.Congrats!!
Richards Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 3:13 PM
I love your unusual twist on this contest! Congratulations, Marty!!
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Marty. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Marty, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Sweetheart Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:36 PM
This is the ONE Marty.. in my opinion.. very expressive and intense... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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