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Deepening Morn

Dawning shades of blue. From deep dark depths to great heights. Hark! Midnight is gone!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2010 7:11:00 AM
C ongratulations on your success in this one Marty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:32:00 PM
Lovely one, Marty...and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/21/2010 5:17:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl
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Date: 2/20/2010 8:04:00 PM
So glad congrats are in order Marty .. a wonderful win.. for u my friend.. I guess my "vibes" on this one were correct.. enjoy this victory .. its terrific.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/20/2010 5:32:00 PM
This reads with a lilt not usually found in Haiku. ( to me anyway.) It is going in my favourites. well done...Margaret
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Date: 2/20/2010 5:19:00 PM
GReat message,Marty , in this descriptive haiku.Congrats!!
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Date: 2/20/2010 3:13:00 PM
I love your unusual twist on this contest! Congratulations, Marty!!
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Date: 2/20/2010 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Raul Moreno's (Awaiting Dawn Contest) Marty. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2010 1:13:00 PM
Marty, Congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:36:00 PM
This is the ONE Marty.. in my opinion.. very expressive and intense... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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