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Deep Woods

In the DEEP woods, where shadows CREEP and play, The winds WEEP, secrets SPEAK and sway, As branches CRACK, the night FALLS back. The MOON glows with a silver TUNE so bright, Each star SPARKS, a mark in the DARK of night, While wolves HOWL under the GLOWING prowl. By the STREAM, where the waters GLEAM and run, The RIPPLE of a stone is quickly NIPPLED and done, As nature SINGS with the WIND'S soft wings.

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Date: 8/30/2024 11:32:00 AM
Hey Jay, Love your word play. OMG that rhymes. LOL! I loved reading your word pictures. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:23:00 AM
Every stanza is full vibrant imagery and wonderful rhyme. I especially like the last one. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/29/2024 11:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Deep Woods" write/story. "Good Luck" Have a great day writing away.................
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Date: 8/29/2024 10:53:00 AM
wonderful onomatopoeia Jay, hugs Jan xx
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