-deep Within the Crux-

Appearance far down the road…
Voices singing by my ear…
The world passing by my eyes…
Nature sings at the sentiment…

Frozen tears withhold implicit words…
The four walls a witness of melancholy…
Deep within the crux an angel dwells…
Causing much pain internally…

Deep within the green colors…
I see passion bleeding with joy…
Fear of falling rain…
Standing by in the darkest weather…

 Speeding cars zooming past…
Every second brings it closer…
Obsession with her presence…
The mirror appears reflection less…

…With coldness filling in…
Reaching out for the appearing hand…
And before I reach your warmth…
Frozen, my hearts ceases to beat…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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March 6, 2010 at 5:15 PM
Intresting write, REally enjoyed...
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November 30, 2008 at 6:41 AM
Yasir - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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November 12, 2008 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 11, 2008 at 8:38 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
November 4, 2008 at 11:16 PM
Yasir - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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