Deep Within

If eyes mirror the clarity of unconditional love - - in which the reflection of mine do, would you feel my heartbeats echoing; deep within you?
----------------- ~ I want you lost in my eyes ~ * A little romantic scribble *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 4:49 AM
Love's symphony echoes in the heart, Lovely write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 6:29 PM
Such a beautiful moment, indeed. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Barden Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 3:19 AM
Exquisitely and deeply romantic, and that limitless wellspring of the soul ... the spark of every personal connection. Just adore this, Brandy, and must fav! I am an eye-swimmer, but I must confess, I am almost as fascinated with the mouth/lips/smile ... when I am attracted to someone, I spend equal time and energy between there and the eyes - my favorite muses, (with the moon and sea). Wonderful write! (I owe you some Soupies!) :-) <3
Nicole Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 1:22 PM
I am in awe that you have placed this short little poem as one your favorites. It is one of my favorites as well. Being, that the eyes truly captivate me. (Especially blue) Thank you Greg. I appreciate you and your thoughts. You can feel my heart through my words. You can see me. ~ Brandy
Juman Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Girl oh girl ---I am really feeling it and trying hard to send it back ---I hope you feel it--- Lovely
Nicole Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 7:44 PM
:) Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush. I even softly giggled. I think what you are sending is in the touch of the wind. ~ Brandy
Hill Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Lost in ones eyes, what compares? You craft lines of love with great precision. Well done!! TAH
Nicole Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Eyes speak- no words are needed. They are an amazing connection of love. Thank you Tobey. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:20 AM
YouRe a romantic. That is a lovely thing.
Nicole Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Thank you Richard. I am just being me. ~ Brandy
Messina Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Beautiful poem, Brandy! love the music too...have a wonderful day...Charlie
Nicole Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thank you Charles. I appreciate your lovely comment. Music is a part of me. The melody creates a mood, and wraps around my heart. ~ Brandy
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 3:06 PM
OOOh-- Brandy I call that being in love. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 11:30 AM
You to Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Darlene. Love is a wonderful emotion caressing the heart. Enjoy moments in your day. ~ Brandy
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