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Deep Within

If eyes mirror the clarity of unconditional love - - 
in which the reflection of mine do,
would you feel my heartbeats echoing; 
deep within you?

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~ I want you lost in my eyes ~

* A little romantic scribble *

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Joseph May

Date: 4/18/2024 4:49:00 AM

Love's symphony echoes in the heart, Lovely write Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 4/19/2024 6:29:00 PM

Such a beautiful moment, indeed. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/18/2018 3:19:00 AM

Exquisitely and deeply romantic, and that limitless wellspring of the soul ... the spark of every personal connection. Just adore this, Brandy, and must fav! I am an eye-swimmer, but I must confess, I am almost as fascinated with the mouth/lips/smile ... when I am attracted to someone, I spend equal time and energy between there and the eyes - my favorite muses, (with the moon and sea). Wonderful write! (I owe you some Soupies!) :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/18/2018 1:22:00 PM

I am in awe that you have placed this short little poem as one your favorites. It is one of my favorites as well. Being, that the eyes truly captivate me. (Especially blue) Thank you Greg. I appreciate you and your thoughts. You can feel my heart through my words. You can see me. ~ Brandy