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Deep Waters

WATER WITH A FISH THAT CANT SWIM?HOW IS THAT? HOW WILL THAT FISH MAKE IT WHEN IT SEEMS THE WATER GETS DEEPER?.. EVEN THOUGH THE FISH ISN'T LIKE THE REST..IS IT STILL A KEEPER? CAN YOU TEACH THIS FISH THINGS THAT IT WILL CARRY FOR THE DURATION OF THIS LIFETIME? DOES THE DEEP WATER FORCE THE FISH TO BE SOLO, MOST TIME? OR DOES IT DISCOURAGE? DO THE DEEP WATER GIVE COURAGE? I HAVE A LOT OF QUESTIONS IT MAY SEEM, BUT THEY ARE ALL LOGICAL! TO STEP OUT ON FAITH,YOU ARE TESTING HOW MUCH DEEPER YOU CAN GO WITH OUT DROWNING.. HOW CAN YOU MOVE THOUGH LIFE WITH OUT FROWNING? OPEN YOUR GILLS.EXPLORE THE SEA..ITS SO MUCH TO BE...SO MUCH TO SEE... STAYING STRONG IS KEY!!! YOU WONDERING WHO THE FISH IS..... WELL I AM SHE.

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Date: 7/25/2016 1:09:00 AM
MS.ERICA JACKSON, enjoyed reading your poem today. ,Thank you for sharing your words. Hope to see you post again.... *SKAT*
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Date: 6/7/2012 1:50:00 PM
this was written a time back,hope you have travelled the seas and is back with more poems,lol,nice write
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:54:00 AM
This was very nice. Thanks for the visit. I'm so happy I got to read your work today.
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Ms.Erica Jackson
Date: 8/12/2011 12:23:00 PM
WELL BLESSINGS TO YOU:) THANK YOU FOR EXPRESSING LOVE*
Date: 5/16/2011 5:47:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ms. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:26:00 PM
i really enjoy reading this poem very inspiring
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:23:00 PM
like they told me "sink or swim"
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Ms.Erica Jackson
Date: 5/12/2011 10:55:00 AM
well...if you read the poem, sometimes, "sinkin' or swimming" isnt that easy...overcoming fears is what i'm expressing :)

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