Casarah Nance Poet Senryu

Deep Sleeped

deep is the sleeper
wakes not for rushing water
chronic bed wetter










For contest senryu -topic  On human foibles: Definition, flaws in human behaviour/character.
date 7-9-18

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Susan Gentry August 6, 2018 at 4:37 PM Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper August 5, 2018 at 2:34 PM Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney August 4, 2018 at 2:51 PM Yikes! Congratulations on your win, Casarah :)

Paris-Maree Boreham August 4, 2018 at 12:48 AM Hello Casarah, Congratulations !!

Line Gauthier August 3, 2018 at 10:47 PM Not fun. Congrats on your winning senryu, Casarah.

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2018 at 3:11 PM good to see this one again!! Congrats.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 3, 2018 at 1:25 PM Lol! Too true. I mean, really, too true ;) Congrats on your win! xomo

Janice Canerdy July 10, 2018 at 1:04 PM This is good one, Casarah! Janice

Lyric Man July 9, 2018 at 7:36 PM This is comic genius, Cas!

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2018 at 6:29 PM oh my, I am glad this never happened to me. I have actually dreamed I was urinating and I still managed not to do it in reality!!! Loved this.

Daniel Turner July 9, 2018 at 3:13 PM Something very few admit to but most do at some point in their life. A distasteful subject, tastefully written, Cas:)

Arturo Michael July 9, 2018 at 2:52 PM It feels so warm and nice...then oh oh...Nice one Casarah...All the best

FJ Thomas July 9, 2018 at 1:56 PM Very true Cas. And the first time I've ever read a poem on something that has affected so many people so commonly.

Jan Allison July 9, 2018 at 9:54 AM made me smile Cas!:-) hugs jan xx

Caren Krutsinger July 9, 2018 at 8:55 AM This is such a profound truth!

Silent One July 9, 2018 at 8:55 AM True..