Deep Sea

I wanna understand the way it works 
mystic life beneath the sea, 
the wonders of the wise mind, 
love 
Only as we speak in whispers under 
the dark lights 
we will become closer 
and once again back into the distance 
Is this a never ending world 
These things will come 
Do not be afraid as the wise fall to great ashes 
The new corruption will rise 
As you dive into the sea of dreams 
where i once was 
towers will fall as the new day light breaks 
through the fire of the night 
I will see the sea as it is 
Nothing to pity about my ideas again 
as yesterdays rain dries away and i commence the mayhem 
tonight 
Everything visioned so beautiful, so pure 
until the day of growth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 6:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Ivan, this is a deep verse... Enjoyed. LINDA
A  Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:57 PM
IVAN, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
Mjelde Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 4:07 PM
This was a great poem, nice one! You also have a nice name, my oldest son have it too... it's a rear name i Norway... He he he... xoxo-Laila
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