Deep Love

I love you deeply With all the little details That make you, my you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 9:59 AM
hmmm, I somehow missed this sweet one yesterday!
West Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 11:53 AM
Hello my friend, and thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Rzhepishevska Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Those words made beautiful haiku. With love and warmest wishes, Larisa
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Hi Larisa, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Lamoureux Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Yes it's all in the details, they are what make each of us so unique.
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 1:16 PM
Hello Richard, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Harrell Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:07 PM
I can feel your true love, dear Rollo. That is how it should be. Love ya, Toquyen
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:09 PM
Ho Toquyen, thank you so much for stopping by. Rollo
Palli Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Nice job!
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Hello Susan, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Horsman Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 1:41 AM
no doubting your love Rollo with this gem, i too love the last line here...
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Hello Harry, thank you for stopping by. Rollo
Cavanaugh Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 10:12 PM
You do such a great job with Haikus and Senryus. Great write Rollo.
West Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 12:06 PM
Hi Jon, thank you for your great comment. Rollo
Sivey Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:40 PM
I loved the last line, "That make you, my you", that's very clever how you did that, fantastic! This poem is awesome, I really enjoyed reading it this evening! You have portrayed love very wonderfully! Great work!!
West Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Hello my friend, and thank you as always for your great commentary. Rollo
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