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Deep Down

You are a great girl I wish you knew of how I feel I fear to tell you what you don't know I am scared I will repeat my feelings like a crow They are entrapped inside And that's where they will reside Never let them out Inside they will scream and shout But on the out I can laugh and joke about So different is my character on the in I wish I were perfect and free of every sin I want to be the best for you All this I want to say is long due But deep down it will all confide And all this I want to say I will hide Never will there be a day When I can speak of this or say This can all come true And that I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/17/2009 9:06:00 PM
wonderful wording ... simple and direct ... but think about telling her how u really feel.... life is too short to hide true feelings of love...
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