Deep Connection

sincere flattery
    passion beyond the twilight
       romantic daydreams

       life lived for reason
    compassion needed for ease
a deep connection

Date Written: September 22, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Beautiful Senryu my friend. It's very nice. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Hi, Laura. I enjoyed seeing this double senryu. Is it for a contest?
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