Deep Concentration

Deep concentration
Mind overflows with ideals
Thoughts expressed in words

© Apr 24 2010 For Abe’s “From a Birmingham Jail”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:54 PM
the middle line is so true!! Good luck in the contest and thanks for your comments tonight! andrea
Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 3:12 PM
who what when where & why? and a twist! all that has to get into 17 sylabbles ;) Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 3:46 AM
Great write...When trapped one can turn the time to something usefull...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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