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Deep Blue Sea

Epic life
Passed down by thee
Creatures of the deep blue sea

In the water
Splish and splash
Trying to avoid a shark attack

At the beach we play in the sand
Ahoy ahoy 
Thank god for land

Crystal castles 
Made by thee
Creatures of the deep blue sea

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Monique Mcmiller July 28, 2009 at 6:38 PM Love the deep blue sea. Blue is great!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 23, 2009 at 8:38 AM Beautiful Steve. Excellent writing. Love, Carol

Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn July 20, 2009 at 11:34 PM interesting poem...it has a rhythmic story line and a very simple but puzzeling answer that i can't put my finger on just yet...simplicity is the hardest thing to uncover....really nice write and interesting! its worth being read twice... Ciara=)

James Marshall Goff July 20, 2009 at 7:17 PM at one with the waters that pass through our life, nice! jim

Carolyn Devonshire July 18, 2009 at 6:42 PM This poem has a nice rhythm, Steven. And I love the refrence to "crystal castles" in the last verse. Good work! Love, Carolyn

Izzy Gumbo July 17, 2009 at 2:28 PM Nice flow of words. Beautiful poem. :)

Charmaine Chircop July 17, 2009 at 10:46 AM crystal castles-beautiful imagery--great write my new friend--charma

Jessica Arteaga July 16, 2009 at 10:16 PM always like things from the deep blue sea :} good poem

Bill Doggett July 16, 2009 at 4:35 PM Very nice poem

Chelsea ... July 16, 2009 at 3:19 PM I like this one a lot, i kind of makes me feel happy, it's really good i like it.