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Deep Blue Sea

Epic life Passed down by thee Creatures of the deep blue sea In the water Splish and splash Trying to avoid a shark attack At the beach we play in the sand Ahoy ahoy Thank god for land Crystal castles Made by thee Creatures of the deep blue sea

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Monique Mcmiller
Date: 7/28/2009 6:38:00 PM
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Love the deep blue sea. Blue is great!
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 7/23/2009 8:38:00 AM
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Beautiful Steve. Excellent writing. Love, Carol
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Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn
Date: 7/20/2009 11:34:00 PM
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interesting poem...it has a rhythmic story line and a very simple but puzzeling answer that i can't put my finger on just yet...simplicity is the hardest thing to uncover....really nice write and interesting! its worth being read twice... Ciara=)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/20/2009 7:17:00 PM
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at one with the waters that pass through our life, nice! jim
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/18/2009 6:42:00 PM
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This poem has a nice rhythm, Steven. And I love the refrence to "crystal castles" in the last verse. Good work! Love, Carolyn
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Izzy Gumbo
Date: 7/17/2009 2:28:00 PM
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Nice flow of words. Beautiful poem. :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/17/2009 10:46:00 AM
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crystal castles-beautiful imagery--great write my new friend--charma
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Jessica Arteaga
Date: 7/16/2009 10:16:00 PM
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always like things from the deep blue sea :} good poem
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Bill Doggett
Date: 7/16/2009 4:35:00 PM
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Very nice poem
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Chelsea ...
Date: 7/16/2009 3:19:00 PM
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I like this one a lot, i kind of makes me feel happy, it's really good i like it.
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