Kiara Lowdog Poet I do not know?

Deep

A deep dark secret
Detected and unlocked
The secrets then started spewing
Blood began to tumble
Hurt started to rumble
Nothing was ever the same
The tables were turned
No one could be trusted
All hearts turned to stone
All was burned
All was tortured
And there was never any resolution
So as I sit here and ponder my every thought
I gaze out my window
And a tear forms to my eye
So, why?

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Kiara Lowdog June 12, 2009 at 10:31 PM you know whats great about poetry? it doesn't need to rhyme. you know what else is great about it? ignorant and malice people like you don't need to appreciate it the same way i do. please stop wasting time on posting comments, you're just making yourself look pathetic.

Kiara High-Cat March 23, 2009 at 4:34 PM First of all, blood doesn't tumble. Secondly, your poetry is terrible, I hope you tear out your eyes. This is one of like 4 poems of yours that isn't in rhyming coplet. It's full of cliche. And redundency. I hate you.