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Deconstruct Me

Your pen moves like silk slipping slow Across my body expressing a glow Each word a touch that I can’t resist Teasing of promises in every twist I feel the pull from your every phrase Like fingertips tracing me in secret ways Expressions slide upon satin sheets Coolness at first then building up heat Words linger like a breath upon my skin Each word draws me closer pulling me in Dreaming of places wild and unknown As thoughts turn exotic, far from home Let me dive into your words, let me drown In the sea of moist thoughts I am bound Every sentence as if wrapped upon a vine Deeper and deeper, sensual line by line Feeling you seep beneath my soft skin Occupying my thoughts letting me fall in I want to be lost in a world that you paint Where logic fades into mystical restraint Telling of seas and oceans and sweet air Riding on sensual thoughts laid bare Allowing me to mingle within words true Showing me a kinda exotic I never knew Tempting with words, warm and smooth Tracing my curves in a rhythmic groove I submit to the heat of your untamed soul As you deconstruct me then make me whole

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Date: 10/12/2024 6:45:00 PM
Ooh lala! Enjoyed the write!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/16/2024 9:46:00 AM
Ahh Kim thank you!:)
Date: 10/12/2024 1:37:00 PM
Yum!!! "...sensual thoughts laid bare...". Humdinger, BC. I'm still sweating!!! :o))
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/12/2024 1:45:00 PM
Arlo thank you so much truly it is appreciated!;)
Date: 10/12/2024 3:40:00 AM
You find yourself very much at home writing romantic, sensual and tempting poetry, Brenda, and this one is proof of that. ~ By the way, I managed to access Soundcloud and enjoyed listening to your poems, this one in particular. Rebel Tease has been doing a very good job! Regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/12/2024 1:45:00 PM
I do feel most comfortable writing as such lol!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/12/2024 1:44:00 PM
I’m so glad you enjoyed my SoundCloud!;) a poem holds so much meaning if recited by the writer I find! One is able to put their emotions out there for all to understand how it is read! Thank you Paul and I hope you will be a frequent listener in the future:)

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