Deconstruct Me

Your pen moves like silk slipping slow 
Across my body expressing a glow
Each word a touch that I can’t resist
Teasing of promises in every twist

I feel the pull from your every phrase
Like fingertips tracing me in secret ways 
Expressions slide upon satin sheets
Coolness at first then building up heat
 
Words linger like a breath upon my skin 
Each word draws me closer pulling me in
Dreaming of places wild and unknown 
As thoughts turn exotic, far from home

Let me dive into your words, let me drown
In the sea of moist thoughts I am bound 
Every sentence as if wrapped upon a vine 
Deeper and deeper, sensual line by line 

Feeling you seep beneath my soft skin
Occupying my thoughts letting me fall in
I want to be lost in a world that you paint
Where logic fades into mystical restraint 

Telling of seas and oceans and sweet air
Riding on sensual thoughts laid bare
Allowing me to mingle within words true 
Showing me a kinda exotic I never knew 

Tempting with words, warm and smooth
Tracing my curves in a rhythmic groove 
I submit to the heat of your untamed soul
As you deconstruct me then make me whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fleming Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Sensuality flowing effortlessly like an unabated, rushing little stream. A stream of words - Queen of the rhyme indeed! Intend to read plenty more also. :) john
Chiri Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 2:49 PM
I hope so John and thank you my dear friend!;)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Ooh lala! Enjoyed the write!
Chiri Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Ahh Kim thank you!:)
Parker Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Yum!!! "...sensual thoughts laid bare...". Humdinger, BC. I'm still sweating!!! :o))
Chiri Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Arlo thank you so much truly it is appreciated!;)
Callus Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 3:40 AM
You find yourself very much at home writing romantic, sensual and tempting poetry, Brenda, and this one is proof of that. ~ By the way, I managed to access Soundcloud and enjoyed listening to your poems, this one in particular. Rebel Tease has been doing a very good job! Regards // paul
Chiri Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:45 PM
I do feel most comfortable writing as such lol!
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October 12, 2024 at 1:44 PM
I’m so glad you enjoyed my SoundCloud!;) a poem holds so much meaning if recited by the writer I find! One is able to put their emotions out there for all to understand how it is read! Thank you Paul and I hope you will be a frequent listener in the future:)
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