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Decisions

Indecisions like puddles.

                                              Do I step over?

                                                 Or jump in?


Quinzain (Verse) contest
10/25/11
by Michael J Falotico

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 6, 2011 at 5:18 AM

well seems I always jump in.... exciting words to reflect upon Michael luv.. good luck in all the contests u entered with your fantastico poetry luv.. guess I am a spontaneous 'jumper'..haha.. hence..wrong decisions in life ..but am learning to be more discerning... great words ... xoxo..

Kash Poet

October 30, 2011 at 5:44 AM

This one is one of the best I have read so far Michael....enjoyed. Best wishes.

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2011 at 11:05 PM

This is really a cool one. I find this little form very difficult to do and you made perfect questions to go with the statement.

Wilma Neels

October 27, 2011 at 1:35 PM

hmmm I could answer you but then it would maybe not be your choice lol ;) how you doing Michael? I am slowly getting into the soup again.. miss ya, love Wilma

Shannon Deane

October 26, 2011 at 8:19 AM

Best of luck Michael in the contest...luv shannon

Poet Destroyer A

October 25, 2011 at 11:19 AM

I say jump in,, take it,, the chance.. of insanity... lol..Kidding.. well that brought a smile to my face... I was always the kind of kid,, that jumped in,,, well fall in if i jumped... hhehe,,, now that brought another thought to mind,,, the moral of my comment is,,, why jump over and take the risk of falling in... just go for the gold, it might not be that bad... Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D.