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Indecisions like puddles. Do I step over? Or jump in? Quinzain (Verse) contest 10/25/11 by Michael J Falotico

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Date: 11/6/2011 5:18:00 AM
well seems I always jump in.... exciting words to reflect upon Michael luv.. good luck in all the contests u entered with your fantastico poetry luv.. guess I am a spontaneous 'jumper'..haha.. hence..wrong decisions in life ..but am learning to be more discerning... great words ... xoxo..
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Date: 10/30/2011 5:44:00 AM
This one is one of the best I have read so far Michael....enjoyed. Best wishes.
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Date: 10/28/2011 11:05:00 PM
This is really a cool one. I find this little form very difficult to do and you made perfect questions to go with the statement.
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Date: 10/27/2011 1:35:00 PM
hmmm I could answer you but then it would maybe not be your choice lol ;) how you doing Michael? I am slowly getting into the soup again.. miss ya, love Wilma
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:19:00 AM
Best of luck Michael in the contest...luv shannon
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:19:00 AM
I say jump in,, take it,, the chance.. of insanity... lol..Kidding.. well that brought a smile to my face... I was always the kind of kid,, that jumped in,,, well fall in if i jumped... hhehe,,, now that brought another thought to mind,,, the moral of my comment is,,, why jump over and take the risk of falling in... just go for the gold, it might not be that bad... Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem,, Take care,..P.D.
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:46:00 AM
hahaha, so true, dear Michael...
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:44:00 AM
I think you'd jump in, you aren't one to miss out are you my friend. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 10/25/2011 7:45:00 AM
The question of choice. Choices can be hard but eventually we have to decide. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 10/25/2011 7:21:00 AM
a creative bomb, michael.. choices are hard to do... stunning! :) huggs
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