Decision Through Reflection

I look into the mirror
And see a face of age
Ravaged by the love of life
And pummled by the rage

The fire that was burning
Now is growing dim
The logs of life are fewer
Than the ashes of the sin

I see my fathers features
In the lines upon my face
Am I to join his journey
Or my mothers saving grace

The words of all outsiders
Have been blocked against my ears
I must face the choice of life
Through smiles and through tears

I have to reap the consequence
Of all the things I've done
And wonder if I've lost my way
Or wonder if I've won

Rockman  :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/22/2013 11:57:00 AM
A captivating expression of self reflection.. So much to ponder and so well written.
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Date: 3/13/2013 4:20:00 PM
Great write on the subject of growing older. It is a fact it happens to all of all sooner or later. Nicely put to words,
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Date: 2/9/2013 4:27:00 PM
Excellent message here, love the ending--ended on a good note, I'm glad. :) Very touching one. Keep up the brilliant work! Always, Laura
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:08:00 AM
Wow, I love this one! Especially the second stanza - comparing the logs of life to the ashes of sin. Brilliant! :)
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Date: 2/5/2013 2:42:00 PM
I could feel the honesty in this poem. It is a winner.
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Date: 2/5/2013 1:48:00 PM
very nicely written! wisdom and rhyme is a great combination...
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