Deception of the Heart...

Tears fall without much thought,
Nothing left nothing sought,
Crippled by your thoughtless acts,
Marked by the unfortunate facts.
Heart was lifted above with ecstacy,
Seeming farther away towards heresy,
Once a word would give me life,
Now pain-striken when you say wife.
Thought destined to live life full,
Loving you made me the fool,
Sacrce had i thought twice with you,
My heart broken because of you.
Thoughts full of sickened hate,
So much lost it's too late,
Once I've loved now i hate,
Broken because of loves poor fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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September 15, 2026 at 6:08 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
December 26, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:39 AM
well done, Natasha Fuiava, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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January 27, 2016 at 8:17 PM
NATASHA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:06 AM
amazing poem... SKAT
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