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Deception and Greed

Deception and Greed

the Pied Piper calls…
Rumpelstiltskin weaving straw,
promises of gold

betrayalmetaphortrustsenryu

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Paul Callus

March 5, 2015 at 12:09 PM

Finally came upon one of your poems which I had missed! Excellent Senryu which depicts deception and greed with capable choice of words. A top rating for you Pandita! All the best. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

March 6, 2015 at 3:32 PM

My friend, Paul, I am so appreciative of all the support you continue to give me even when I haven't been around much lately.Thank you for your kindness and enjoy a wonderful weekend! Pandita.

Robin Davis

July 1, 2014 at 9:42 PM

Pandita Short but with a lot of meaning and a lesson to be learned about lies and greed. Thank you for the great comment on my Storms poem.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 2, 2014 at 1:41 AM

Thank you, dear Robin. Your compliments are always appreciated and I am glad you liked this piece!

Deborah Shiells

May 30, 2014 at 9:26 AM

Hi Pandita, I wanted to stop by and say hello to you and read some of your writes. This is a beauty that speaks volumes in so few words... Well done my friend. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Thanks for visiting me as well:~) Love and Peace, Deborah

Pandita Sietesantos

May 30, 2014 at 10:28 AM

Deborah, thank you so much for stopping by and for your wonderful comments! This is one of my favorite writes! Let's visit often! Love and Peace to you too!

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