December Resembles Death

Breathlessly
Aimlessly
Startled in fact
Still frightened by the sudden impact
Recent studies have shown there was no way he could've survived
On that cold December day 
She watched her Daddy die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 30, 2011 at 9:20 AM
This here write Amanda, sounds very powerful! Though details are missing here, on the cause of death, the picture is well devolped with the child in despair. Awesome write dear poet ! Have a blessed weekend....much love, james
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