Deceived

Moldy floating rocks.
Deceived by clear sparkling lake.
Mirrored polution.


for MORNING AMBIENCE contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Pickett Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Everything but the pollution.... Great verse....:JP]
Sweetheart Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 8:01 PM
Thankxxx kind sir for "judging" for me.. appreciate the input.. see how easy it is? this title is terrific.. luv ya.. "Sweetheart"
Sweetheart Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:29 PM
I have an idea.. why don't u be the judge? or sponsor one? will help u if u say yes.. I just luv this expression in Haiku about the new Morning Ambiance photo...luv.. this title... did u like my title? I got it from the Italian to English dictionary .. translation .. Atmosphere... luv ya.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Interesting idea for the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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