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Deceitful Cat

DECEITFUL CAT I was deceived, my heart is sad! My dear canary is now dead. Oh fluffy cat curled in the sun, Kin of lion-- kills for fun. How dare you pose as faithful friend When you have caused this song to end? How can you sit like guest and beg-- Purr and rub against my leg? No remorse will touch your heart And so I harden on my part. At my feet your kill was laid-- For that sweet life nine shall be paid!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Victoria. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2012 7:54:00 AM
Many congratulations on your super Victoria! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 7:53:00 AM
oh, victoria. Please don't kill the cat just for doing what nature tells her to do. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading your winning poem today. It's one I had not seen!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:12:00 AM
Congratulations our monkey eat my canary I suppose it hurts the same lol. Congratulations xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 7:59:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Victoria. I'm sorry about the demise of the canary, but don't be too hard on kitty. He's just doing what comes natural. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:41:00 PM
Victoria, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine poem and your great win... Terry
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:28:00 PM
CONGRATS VICTORIA ON AN OUTSTANDING FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:02:00 PM
SO funny but sorry about your dear canary!... I read somewhere that common house cats are by far the most efficient hunters of their species...congrats to you Victoria! - Tim
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Date: 11/12/2012 11:43:00 AM
congrats on your win Victoria
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Date: 11/12/2012 8:04:00 AM
Nice work! Well done!
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Date: 11/12/2012 7:50:00 AM
This is a great poem!!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/10/2012 5:47:00 PM
passionate,,,, but I hope the cat is still alive ;-)
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Date: 11/9/2012 2:49:00 PM
wow, a poem of passion.. and if true, i'm not suprised...like this, Victoria,
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