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Deceit

alliance is no longer around 
                 we're stuck between 
                            sham and deceit.

analogyconfusionencouragingmonoku

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David Kavanagh

June 20, 2021 at 1:02 PM

You certainly hit the nail on the head Lasaad, the world is full of pretence, and fakes, but I really think it only becomes apparent as we get older and wiser, of course there are still genuine people, but alas are in short supply, an absolute salt of the earth monoku, cheers David

David Kavanagh

June 20, 2021 at 1:33 PM

In my experience honestly can be taken advantage of, and seen as a weakness by predators, my only true friends, ie people I would trust with my life, are indeed my family, probably a sad reflection of me, but it’s true, cheers David

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 1:19 PM

So true David, Most people believe that time is important when interacting with others, and in certain instances, it is difficult to be successful when you have a large deal of honesty. Appreciate your comment, have a good evening.

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2021 at 10:56 AM

this really does seem so true.

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:21 AM

Absolutely, Andrea, it's heart-made, thanks for your visit and comment.

Heidi Sands

June 20, 2021 at 8:00 AM

Much truth in these times. Well written! :)

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:22 AM

Appreciate your kind words, Heidi, Blessings

Sara Kendrick

June 20, 2021 at 7:49 AM

Yes, sometimes it is all a sham. I see that the world is becoming what is mentioned or spoken of many times in the Bible and people are on the train in the wrong direction. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:25 AM

So true, Sara, and thanks for your kind words and great visit, blessings, and best regards

Rama Balasubramanian

June 20, 2021 at 7:04 AM

So very true. Don't expect!

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:27 AM

Absolutely Dear friend, if we expect nothing, we never get disappointed.

Vijay Pandit

June 20, 2021 at 4:32 AM

Well said, Lasaad.

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:28 AM

Thanks for your kind comment, dear Vijay.

Demetrios Trifiatis

June 20, 2021 at 2:41 AM

A painful truth excellently expressed, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings!

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:30 AM

So true, dearest friend, if we expect nothing, we never get disappointed. Best regards

Tom Cunningham

June 20, 2021 at 1:55 AM

It seems somewhere along the lines trust was lost. Tom

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:31 AM

Blessed is who expects nothing, dear friend Tom.

Victor Buhagiar

June 19, 2021 at 11:22 PM

Prime monoku. You are good at these.

Sotto Poet

June 20, 2021 at 11:32 AM

Thanks, dear Victor, I'm glad you like it.

L Milton Hankins

June 19, 2021 at 5:50 PM

Ah, Lasaad, I would prefer to take a more positive approach. But, I admit, sometimes I feel this way. Caused me to think...and that is good!

Sotto Poet

June 19, 2021 at 6:06 PM

That is very true; sometimes, this mood hits me, and I have no clue why or where it comes. But, I admit, I have these thoughts from time to time. I'm sorry, but I can't help myself. Thank you for your consideration. Milton

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